Saturday, May 9, 2009

MAYA NAGARI

Maa Lo!
Maya Nagarire
Manisha O Murty
Murty O Manisha Bari Hueni ...

 Maa Lo!
Maya Nagarire
Mendha bi Bhenda Palatuchhi
Mathurara Mayabinee
Mohineenka Mayare ...

 Maya, Moha, Mamatara
Mane nahin Ethi
Mana Paain Mana Nahin Ethi
Maana Maryada bi
Mulya heena Ethi ....

Maa Lo!
Maya Nagarire
Mo bhitare Jete Bhaya
Manare Sete Koutuhala
Mun Kintu
Mayapurira Moharu
Mukuli Paruni lo Maa ....

This Poem is written by Mr. Fakir Mohan Nahak
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6 comments:

  1. manmath sahuMay 9, 2009 at 6:40 AM

    kudos!

    good poem... but how about changing "Mendha bi Bhenda Palatuchhi" to "Bhenda bi Mendha Palatuchhi"?

    just my pinch of thought.

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  2. Dr. Fakir Mohan NahakMay 9, 2009 at 6:44 AM

    Dear Manmath,
    Thanks for the comments.
    But my thought is some thing absord, you can say "Udbhata", another point is I wanted to stick to my style of maintaing the initial letter.

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  3. manmath sahuMay 9, 2009 at 6:54 AM

    well, you have fetish for alliteration. then it's good.

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  4. UnknownJuly 20, 2009 at 10:35 AM

    it is a good poem. i like this very much.

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  5. Soumya saraswataFebruary 19, 2010 at 8:21 AM

    Good thought sir...

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  6. UnknownMarch 8, 2010 at 3:20 AM

    i love it .. why don't u add your articles in our online emagazine eShabda via www.eodissa.com

    i love this article

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